Besides the mistakes that are pointed out, I love the way readers become involved with the characters. When readers start asking about character motivations instead of concentrating on the special effects, it means you're connecting with them on a personal level.
-- Alan Dean Foster
   
Alan Dean Foster   Name:
Alan Dean Foster
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Author
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Birth:
November 18, 1946
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